Thursday, May 19, 2016

Chapter 20

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Ony'a finds herself in a dream vision. She is inside the temple and is floating towards a body on a table. It appears unmoving, dead, but the appearance is deceptive because the eyes suddenly fly wide open. She wakes in shock and realizes that she had seen the face of the dictator Kotygal who was thought to be dead. She shares the vision with her brother Lagos who takes it to be a warning. They plan to leave the sanctuary before Kotygal can send any troops.

An excerpt:

A room. Large and imposing. She does not recognize it. She’s never seen it before. Its floors are hard and polished; its walls, cold. There are things on the walls: banners, flags, hangings. Maybe signs, Maybe messages. Maybe just broken fragments. There is light: a soft white light. Candles. Candles everywhere. They jut from the walls. They sit on tiny tables, crevasses in the wall, on the ends of sticks short and tall. They float. The ceiling: she does not see the ceiling, only a grayness that disappears into darkness. No stars. No closing of the space within. A glimpse of forever.

There are people in the room. They are silent. They are huddled together. They stand around a large table. Their heads are bowed. They stare at the table. They move and sway to no sound except the wind: the wind from above. It sings to them a hushed mournful wail. The people move in its rhythmless tempo, but they do not really hear it. They feel it. It comes from beyond the ceiling and plays with the furniture. It runs along the walls until it finds no where else to go and dies.

She decides to move. Her feet are in stride, but she does not touch the floor. The floor: it is no more solid than the ceiling. It is more like a cloud that struggles to define above and below. It looks like it could envelop a sanctuary. The building would simply and softly float down into it. It would sway a bit, but there would be no resistance. Its colors would just be washed away until they were wiped clean of existence. But is does not swallow anything now. Maybe it is not hungry. Maybe it is sleeping.

She moves across the room towards the table. The people surrounding it make no movement to confirm they recognize her. They do not turn toward her, yet they move aside. They make room for her. She steps into the space. There is a figure on the table, a body. It is a man, an important man. His clothes tell you so. They are ornate, decorated in colors that dare you to challenge his pomposity. They scream “laugh well, it shall be your last.”

She comes closer. She looks at the face. It is locked in pain, frozen in anguish. His face holds on to its past, but he sees nothing of the present. That face. She knows this man. She has seen him maybe just a few times, maybe as a child. He brings pain. He brings fire from the empty sky. He kills the fighters of the battle of glory, but knows no honor. He is feared. He is hated. Those about him do not worship, do not praise. They are workers dispensing fear to assuage their own. They are drones repeating his words and spreading his policies so that they do not fall victim to them. They stare at him in dread for the possibility that they may lose their shadow from a burning sun.

She moves even closer.

Tuesday, May 10, 2016

Chapter 19

Riahn, the head of the Kevutian Detention Center, begins to torture Lagolen to get information about possible attacks on the Kevutians. A sacred holiday called the Day Of Awakening is coming soon and Riahn and his superiors are worried that it will become an excuse for more attacks. Lagolen gives him no information. In fact, he manages to get into his tormentor's head.

An excerpt:

Riahn entered the special room at the end of the hall. He was on the lowest level of the detention center–the level few people visited, fewer still by choice. The room was all block walls made of stone and crushed dirt. Gone were the brown dipda trees and the lush green leaves of the kova vines. The brown-black dirt that once mingled with leaves and branches was the only reality here. Though there were two thin slots up above designed to let in a small amount of filtered sunlight, they currently added nothing to the dullness of the room. By now there were only a few horons of sunshine each cycle and those horons had long passed. Instead the room now was lit only by a few torches. The solar powered lights preferred by the Kevutians were becoming useless; there were not enough horons of light during the day to keep them charged. Riahn noticed how the light from the torch flames flickered along the walls of the stark room. It seemed to him that they were dancing in celebration. Let us rejoice! We have another one in our midst! And in the center of the room was the prize.


Riahn walked toward his catch with the pride a hunter enjoys after bagging his prey. With arms tied to thick ropes above his head and his feet similarly bound below stood a man old in years but young in spirit.


“The days grow short,” said Riahn.


The prisoner said nothing. Though his body hung in painful exhaustion, his eyes glared with a seemingly endless source of strength. Encircling those eyes were patches of blood and abrasions. Mindless guards!


“Soon it will be the… what do you call it?” Riahn continued, undeterred. He watched the man’s eyes follow him realizing that, if they could, they would have jumped from the man’s face and strangled him on their own. As it was, they had to just watch.


Riahn paced back and forth in front of those burning eyes. “The, uh, Day of Awakening. Isn’t that what it’s called?” He took a few more circuitous steps and watched the face of the prisoner move only enough to allow the eyes to maintain their cursed grip on him. “Once every painfully long and gruelling cycle, the sun… uh, pardon me… Yocu dips further and further into the horizon until there is nothing but darkness for five days. Then there comes the glorious day when Yocu returns on the horizon and a new light fills the world. That is the special day, isn’t it? The Day of Awakening.”


Riahn stopped his pacing and stood a small distance away from the prisoner so that he could see the whole person and observe his reaction. He had to admit the man was working to maintain control, though nearly physically depleted. Only a slight flicker in those piercing eyes gave him away. He had endured horons of pain and agony under the Kevutian’s sadistic hand whose training and experience made it possible for him to inflict such torture for long periods of time. He knew when to inflict pain and when to stop so that the victim’s body was forced to endure just enough before it shut down in shock or death. He was truly talented and took great pride in his work.

“Ah, you see?” Riahn said. “I have read your sacred book, your Yocu Sachen. I have seen the covenant.” He began his pacing again. “Every Myshkan, or should I say, every Yocugan must pay honor to the Temple at least once every cycle before the Day of Awakening. Yes? Then on that sacred day the Masters come forth and bless their people, bestowing upon them the Sacred Dust.” He stopped to look at the flame of one of the torches. “Sacred Dust. Seems a bit strange to have the culmination of a hallowed day be the gift of a handful of dirt! It’s not even sacred dirt, special dirt, dirt from some hallowed ground. It’s the same stuff you step on every day.” He paused to think, then continued. “I suppose there is some hidden significance to the act or maybe it is simply because it is given by those most pompous and arrogant despots you once called your Masters.” He turned back to face his prisoner. “Yet surely you know these pointless practices have been banned. We constructed sanctuaries in every province as alternatives to the temple. Even your cherished Yocu Sachen allows for that. Oh yes, I know that some of you pass the Temple innocently by and pretend to ignore it while in your mind you are going through the illustrations. But you…” He turned to directly face the elderly detainee. “You had the audacity to step on that pile of dirt in front of the Temple and bow to it.” He paused. “What were you thinking, old man?”

Sunday, May 8, 2016

Chapter 18

The Myshkan rebels with Lyrin and Lagos leading rush the Kevutian Regional Command Headquarters in Lunik Province and overtake it with little effort. With total surprise on their side, they are able to capture the buildings and take many officers hostage. They are all too happy to destroy the office of the fee collector. The Myshkans start to take out their anger and frustration on the captured soldiers but Lagos makes them stop. Ony'a finds the officer in charge of the Kevutians and he is made an offer. Lagos will release all of them if they go peacefully and tell the maceoran that they should leave Pa'Myshka. The officer tells Lagos that the Kevutians would never allow that.

An excerpt:

Minlennavi 9 “Lenn” stood at his post. He had been there for three horons now and was due for a shift change but no officer had yet come by to relieve him. He would just have to wait. He recalled one time when he had been on duty for six horons and there was no officer in sight to let him go. It turned out his immediate officer had discovered the joys of kova wine and had passed out before she remembered to check on her posts. That was a long time to stand guard and guarding was one of the least exciting jobs for a Kevutian soldier. But, he stood tall and did his job like he always did. He knew that if he was ever going to move up in rank that he was going to have to do a good job so he stood his ground and did his best to look like the model soldier just as he had done for most of his adult life. It didn’t seem to faze him that he had never been offered a single promotion in all his time in the security service nor that he was still just a light junran, he was certain that one day he would be noticed and rewarded.

This day had started much like any other. He started his guard duty at the Kevutian Regional Command Headquarters of Lunik Province just before light and remained there until he could be relieved. Like most days this one had started quietly. The Regional Headquarters was never as busy as the main temple in Kodok Province and since the main temple was not far away, most people preferred to do their business there. Still, this province had its own needs and requirements and a handful of soldiers and officials could be seen occasionally moving through the buildings. As the day progressed, however, the activity around the buildings increased.

Lenn had been on guard through the short daylight time and now, as dark descended, there was an increase in activity. It started with just a few soldiers moving quickly through the buildings then the number of increased. They were running about with worried and confused looks on their faces. They were dashing into buildings then out of buildings. Soon a pattern of people was criss-crossing the grounds. It was pandemonium and Lenn had never seen anything like it before. But, with all the people moving about, not a single one had come to him to explain what was happening nor had anyone thought to let him leave. So, he remained loyally on guard, without moving, as turmoil erupted all around him.

He maintained his gaze forward but watched things develop with his peripheral vision. His back was to the entrance of the main building and he could hear constant movement behind him. His job was not to restrict Kevutians from entering the building but to prevent Myshkans from causing any trouble. In all the cycles in which he had come to stand at this or any other building in the complex, there had never been any trouble. He had come to see his job as one of the easiest though it certainly wasn’t stimulating. The only Myshkans he had seen here were escorted by other soldiers. For good reason, they tended to avoid these offices.

Today would be different.

Friday, May 6, 2016

Chapter 17

The Sifuti meet with Lyrin, the head of the resistance, in the Lunik Province Sanctuary. Lyrin recognizes Ony'a as the daughter of Sizo. The Sifuti tell him they have come to rescue him and his people. Lyrin declines the offer. He tells them he and his people would rather die free where they are than live in bondage. As they talk a rumor of the death of Kotygal runs through the camp. They believe it is their chance to make a successful attack against the Kevutians.

Excerpt:

“Who are you?” Lyrin demanded harshly. He standed before them like a mountain, bodysuit covered in layers of other fabrics that hung loosely in an ill-defined pattern. They looked like fragments torn from previous suits thrown together to cover the great surface of his body. The long beard and scraggly hair completed the picture of a wild countryside capped by white peaks.

“We are Sifuti,” responded Avin.

Lyrin turned to look at the five of them before them. “I can see that,” he said. “Yet you bring a Kevutian here with you.”

“He helped us get here,” said Avin.

“No doubt,” said Lyrin with a hint of sarcasm. “What do you want?”

Avin looked at the big man with curiosity. Was he playing with us? “We want to to help you leave here and escape the siege you are under.”

Once again Lyrin looked over the faces of the people before him then turned in one grand motion that set the fabrics on his body in a swirling motion. Maybe those shards had been added just for this effect. He walked to the door of the temple, opened it, and started to step inside. “We don’t need your help,” he boomed.

“Oyn’a?” whispered Lagos to his sister.

The big man went to step through the door of the temple. Oyn’a was about to whisper her response but then picked up her head and looked directed toward Lyrin. She answered in full voice: “Anger, mistrust… emptiness!”

Fok Lyrin stopped in mid-stride. His hand held the latch that opened the door to the temple and had it not been for that fact the great mountain may have toppled on the floor. As it was, he maintained his position for a moment’s hesitation, regained his balance, and turned around. He walked directly toward Ony’a. As he stepped, the others parted the way for him the same way the bow of a ship parts the seas. He came to stand directly in front of her, took her face in his hands, and studied it. Such a move may have cost a limb to any other man but not this one. There was something overwhelming and captivating about him. She chose to remain still.

“What is your name?” Lyrin asked, but his voice made it sound as if he already knew the answer.

“I am Ny Oyn’a.”

“Daughter of Sizo?”

“Yes,” said Oyn’a.

Lyrin lowered his hand and looked away. “No,” he said to no one. “It wasn’t supposed to happen this way.” He turned to look at the young man standing next to Oyn’a. “And you? You are Lagos?”

“Yes,” said Lagos. “But how....”

“I knew your mother,” said Lyrin.

Sunday, April 24, 2016

Chapter 16

Lagolen makes a crash landing onto the shore of the river at the base of the gorge. He works his way to the top of the gorge and through a rice field until he arrived at the main Temple. There he followed the long tradition but recently outlawed practice of bowing before the Temple to honor their religion and their former leaders, the Masters. Knowing his action would alter his future forever, he fell to his knees in the prescribed manner and honored his traditions. Immediately, he was captured by the Temple guards but, as he was being taken away, he overheard that the Kevutian man in charge (the maceoran) was dead and managed to tell others before he was taken away to the dreaded detention center.

An excerpt:

Lagolen’s feet hit the wet ground on the bank of the shallow central river, but he had come in too fast. He toppled over himself and rolled head over feet, then sideways, until he ended up flat on his back on a bed of wet stones and gravel. HIs bodysuit helped protect him against cuts and scratches but his hands were left unprotected and now had several bloody abrasions. He gathered himself together and moved to the edge of the moving water to wash his hands. He wiped his wet hands along his forehead and noticed some additional blood: a cut on the side of his head just before the hairline. It did not seem serious. What was more difficult than the scratches was the overall pain in his body. It reminded him that he was no longer young and agile. Muscles and joints ached. He moved slowly and assessed his pains to make sure there was nothing serious.

Satisfied that his pains were mostly just bothersome he moved away from the river and walked along its stony bank, heading north. On either side of him, the walls of the canyon rose straight up. It was dark down at the bottom because the sun’s light was fading, but the slit of sky above him was still bright and tinged green. He was not in a hurry; the dark of night would be what he needed to complete his journey. He was able to make out a stairway that led to yet another bridge overhead and made his way up the steps until he reached the top. By the time he had worked his way there, it was mostly dark.

He headed east and found his way into a rice field. With the fading light on his back, he simply pushed forward through the wet grass. By the time he reached the other side of the field the landscape was almost completely covered in darkness but this was no impediment to him. He knew his way all too well. He had been making this journey all his life, though he usually approached from his home in the north. He knew that soon the wet rice field would become more dry and solid and then he would reach the graduated terraces that led to the chantry.

When he did reach the first of three levels, he stopped to catch his breath. From here he could make out his objective. The torches set inside the chantry lit its interior and shone as a shining landmark in the dark. It was large; in fact, it was several buildings connected together, for it once served as the residences and the administrative center for the Masters. All the buildings focused on one central but forward edifice that stood higher than the rest. Inside were the symbols that represented the Masters and the history of the people of Myshka. It was the focus for adoration and consecration. It was also his goal. He could just make out the corner of the tower of that building from this angle. He was approaching its northwest corner and would need to come around to its front to complete his task.

Tuesday, April 19, 2016

Chapter 15

Erut loses his grip while crossing the rickety rope bridge. He is saved by a safety rope and the efforts of Lagos. On the remaining trip across, Lagos explains to his friend Omin how his religion has been changed by the discussion by Erut. From the gorge, the small group of four make their way to a place called the Pivinia Plateau–a flat rock formation at the edge of the province below which is nestled the sanctuary. Erut attempts to trick one of the Kevutian soldiers surrounding the sanctuary but he only succeeds in distracting him long enough to be knocked out by Ony'a. The rescue team sneak into the sanctuary and talk to the person leading the revolt named Fok Lyrin. When they get in they find themselves surrounded by rebels with knives pointed at them.

An excerpt:

The view from the center of the gorge looking down was, literally, dizzying. Erut gasped at the vision of the gaping hole below him, lost his senses, and panicked. His foot slid off the center rope sending his body plunging into the chasm but his progress was stopped as fast as it had been started by the safety rope that caught him and jerked his body back up. Lagos had seen it coming so he had been able to brace himself for the impact, but Omin had his back to the scene and was caught off guard by the sudden jolt. Erut’s body yanked the rope on the right side causing ripples to flow through them all. Omin’s foot slid off the central rope and he was sent down in the same direction as Erut. His safety rope caught him as well and another round of jarring vibrations was sent through the ropes. Omin, being much heavier than Erut, sent more violent waves through the cordage. Lagos had, once, again, to deal with the repercussions and just managed to avoid slipping off the main rope for the second time. Everybody remained as they were until the ropes ceased moving. Lagos helped Erut get back on his feet, although it was difficult to maintain balance himself, as he lent a hand to the Kevutian. Omin managed to get back up on his own. Erut just kept chanting “I’m sorry.”


When everyone was back in position, Lagos spoke to Erut: “Now, you see? You’re not going to fall to your death. Just do as I say and we will all get across.”


Erut took his position again and found that familiar place on Omin’s back to send his concentration and fears.


Omin started walking along the ropes again but leaned his head to the side so that the others could hear him talk. “How many times are you going to save this puny fool’s life, Lagos? He’s just going to get us killed.”


Erut and Lagos followed him across while Lagos responded. “That’s where you’re wrong, Omin. He is the one who is going to save us.”


“I am?” Erut said as he started to turn his head, but thought it better just to keep it locked in a forward position.”


“Our little friend here brought us the words of The Cyclonus and I realized the truth of our own situation in those words. We are masters of our own destiny,” said Lagos.


“We are Yocugu, not a bunch of blindly compliant, um…. uh…” Omin said defiantly.


“Paraks?” Lagos said.


“Sounds more like "parasite" to me.”


“No, my friend Omin. We are more than Yocugu now.”


Omin said, “Lagos, what has happened to you?”

“Our path has been clearly set out before us, we just have been too blind to see it. Our Kevutian friend here has lifted the hood from our eyes.”

Friday, April 15, 2016

Chapter 14

Lagolen makes his way to the central temple. As a lifelong devotee of the Yocu religion he feels compelled to complete his religious obligation to pay tribute to the temple. Along the way he contemplates the conversation that he and his children had with Erut. He comes to the realization that his son was right about the Kevutian had revealed to them. They come to believe that their old rulers, called the Masters, were not forcibly removed from the planet but that they left by their own plans. In effect they were telling their people that it was time to grow up and develop themselves. He and his children realize that the destiny of the Myshkans is in their own hands and they decide to take action to get their lands back.

An excerpt:

Ny Lagolen stood at the edge of the gorge and looked over. It was dark, but the torches set along various parts of the canyon walls lit his way. He checked his fittings and connections, then spread his arms and fell into the depths. Immediately the air filled the material connected between his arms and, after he spread apart his feet, the material between his outstretched legs filled as well. He glided up the length of the gorge. Gentle ripples of air tugged at his arms and legs and he could feel the gentle turbulence against his face. Though he was slowly gliding down, subtle updrafts from the sides of the canyon helped keep him aloft for a long time. He would be able to make the journey in two lengths. There would be plenty of time to just enjoy the flight, and to think.

Lagolen welcomed the chance to ponder. He had just been involved in several strange and disturbing conversations after the meeting with Erut. A proud Yocugu of many risings, Lagolen carefully followed the rituals prescribed by the Masters for as long as he could remember. Even now he was on his way to the Chantry for the requisite pilgrimage, but, somehow, everything he had known and felt about the ancient Myshkan religion was different and it was all because of that squeaky little Kevutian. He had spoken the words that set off a firestorm in the mind of his son whose thoughts, Lagolen always insisted, were rarely coherent. Suddenly the young man was focused like never before on an idea that even Lagolen had to agree made some sense.

For lifetimes the Masters were exactly what their title inferred. They were the rulers of Rishivon. They showed their people how to construct the dipda and kova barriers that made it possible for them to live and survive. The Masters also showed them how to start fields for growing food and how to glide through the gorge. The people started building the first province–Kodok Province– and then expanded to add the other provinces. The Masters also taught them the principles of honor and courage in battle as the provinces settled into contestant feuds between each other.

As Lagolen flew along the gorge, he could see one of the many bridges up ahead. It spanned the narrow crossing of the chasm with a foot-lane wide enough to hold four people abreast. Its supports were underneath and formed a trapezoid. Stair-like structures ran along the sides of the canyon and lead to the edges of the bridge. They crisscrossed along the wall with small ledges built at the angles. Since he was still moving along at a good height, he flew underneath the bridge and continued. Certainly there were Kevutian soldiers and other Myshkans crossing that bridge, but he had changed from his Sifuti bodysuit to a more colorful and traditional outfit. Few would pay attention to him as he passed underneath. He whisked by with barely a sound and returned to his thoughts.

Lagolen had been one of the proud and honored leaders of the fighters of Kachik Province when the Kevutians had first appeared in the skies. The actions of the invading Kevutians were swift and relentless. Within only a few days they had destroyed most of the southern half of Lukva Province and threatened to do the same to the rest if the people did not resign themselves to their control. Soon after the Kevutians became the new rulers of the planet they named Pa’Myshka. Next the Kevutians committed the greatest and most shocking affront to the people of old Rishivon: they evicted the Masters. Some were killed, but most escaped on their own. This was inconceivable to the ones now called Myshkans. How could anyone remove those who had shaped and formed their lives? This was the unspoken thought that filled every waking moment of every occupied Myshkan.